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Metall Ark (XD®) Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:23 pm Post subject: A new Story |
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Hi guys I´m starting to write an fanfiction. However this is the first chapter. It´s not very long and is more like a prolouge. It happend right after Terranigma.
Chapter 1
Return
After Dark Gaia was beat the world gain peace. The Underworld disappear and with it the legendary hero. He got now a peacefull sleep. But the peace of the Overworld won´t hold long. A few weeks later a new life was created. It happend in the Beruga´s lab. Some of his lab member tried to creat a clone. The clone looks like the legendary hero but with a small different. His eyes are red, evil red. The clone was created by the blood of Dark Gaia and the DNA of the legendary hero.. At first the clone acted like being a puppet. But it was only an act. A few weeks later the clone finally got crontroll over his power, he created a sword of darkness. During an expermient the clone find out that he was a clone. He though if he can kill the lengdary hero he will be no clone more cause he is stronger then the original. With this though in his mind he began to destroy the lab. The lab members have no chance to stop him. They were all killed by his sword. The lab was going to blow up and fire starts in the lab. The Shadow has return and this time his name is Shadow Ark. _________________
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Flamez Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2011 2:39 pm Post subject: |
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Grammar at work!
After Dark Gaia was defeated the world was at peace. The Underworld disappeared and with it the legendary hero, who was now at peace. But the peace of the Overworld cannot hold for long. A few weeks later new life was created. This new life began in Beruga´s lab. Some of his lab members had tried to create a clone, and succeeded. The clone looks exactly like the legendary hero but with one small difference. His eyes are red, evil red. The clone was created from the blood of Dark Gaia and the DNA of the legendary hero..
At first the clone acted like a menial puppet. But it was only an act. A few weeks later the clone finally got control over it's power, it created a sword of darkness. During an experiment the clone found out that it was a clone. The clone thought if he could kill the legendary hero he would no longer be a clone because he would be stronger and better then the original. With this though in his mind he began to destroy the lab. The lab members had no chance of stopping him. He slaughtered them all with his sword. The destruction that he caused started a fire, a fire the will eventually consume and destroy the lab.
The Shadow of the hero has returned and this time his name is Shadow Ark. _________________
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