Best Fanfic Ever!

[Tiga X]

Well, I think the fanfic truly kicks arse anyway, though yeah, the grammer is sometimes crappy. So who here is a writer? We should all write one together sometime!

[Manibrandr System]

PaGaN3l3m3nts wrote:

I said I could, didn't I?

I know that you can, I was asking Blazer.

[blazer]

Joan-Michele wrote:

blazer wrote: he just copied the last part of the game with minor editing so what's good about it. He made it presentable, but it doesn't matter. Can you do any better?

to tell you the truth no.to be frank he did a good presentation and managed to keep the storyline interesting but otherwise it wasn't that good.

[Jason Tandro]

blazer wrote:

he just copied the last part of the game with minor editing so what's good about it.

That's actually pretty asinine. He presented a totally unheard of situation involving the Jackal, made clear the internal struggles between Will, Lily and Kara, and still presented it in what could almost been seen as a 2nd person view point (even though officially it would be 3rd person Omniscient).

Have you even read the story? I don't suspect it would appeal if you haven't taken any courses and learned to appreciate the subject. As an avid writer myself (as any regular here will agree) especially on the subject of fanfictions I know what I'm talking about.

[Manibrandr System]

Jase, it's a well known fact that Blazer aka Jamezvenz is an ass-talker

[Tiga X]

Ass-talker! That's the word I was looking for!

[PaGaN3l3m3nts]

Ah, sorry for the misunderstanding, then. ^_^ At any rate, it was good for me anyways. I've been neglecting my IoG fanfiction for a while, and that got me working on it again. Of course, mine was really just a novelization of the game as well, but it's actually planned as novel length...
I think the main reason I was only so-so about this fic was that it was the same concept, in a much more abridged format. So, sense I've planne dout in my mind how I'd like to tell everything, I just wantes a lot more detail out of it all in his.
I like really long, involving stories. I normally hate the length of most fanfic chapters, and the brevity of scenes and details in longer ones. But, I guess he did a rather decent job for quick, concise plot summary.
It didn't grab me, but it was good enough for me to keep reading 'til the end. BLAH! I should shut-up about it already. *shuts-up*

[Jason Tandro]

Tiga X wrote:

Ass-talker! That's the word I was looking for!

Same here. I don't know if I'm turned on or scared by this revelation.

*Shut's up*