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Are my sketches any good?
3/3 Very Good
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2/3 Good, but something is off
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1/3 I don't like it
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0/3 What the hell were you thinking
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WHERE'S FREEDAN AND SHADOW
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lol jackal
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Other. (explain)
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PostHydra.7 Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 2:48 am   Post subject: I tried... I really did...(a drawing) Reply with quote

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ahhhhhhhh

anyone remember my quote a few days ago?

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Oh dear god. That character art.... oh oh *death* I thought the american intruction book art was bad but-but this. this is too much oh *dies again*

CIRCUS OF GAIA! They all look like clowns. D8



I will redraw them. I will take in consideration their sprites, attitudes, living conditions, all the factors! YES! I will save them! (even though I won't do that much better)

.... when I have time...



well. THE TIME HAS COME! I didn't replay the game because I was to eager to do this. I did take in consideration their ages, attitudes, and previous designs. I didn't redraw all of them either (no Freedan, Shadow, or Hamlet/Becky), but I did add a few. I mostly used the sprites for referance, but I did occasionally look at Moto Hagio's designs (I can't look at them that long without my eyes burning). They are just coloured sketches. Don't kill me. For what you are about to see may be disturbing. veiwer discresion is advised.













My verion:

Full size: http://sakkidattahydra.deviantart.com/art/FANART-Illusion-of-Gaia-Chara-123842265



Moto Hagio Design:




North American Design:





ahhhh this feels like my art class gala again ahhhhh Scared

Feedback please. Good or bad. c:


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PostJason Tandro Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:24 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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I like this alot. Your art style is a nice blend of east and west. A couple of things came to mind, but none of them were deal-breakers:

1. The characters look too old.

Keep in mind these kids are in their tween years. Your art makes them look like teenagers (and makes the young Erik look like a 13-year old). This is good, though, because it gives an idea of what they will look like when they grow up (at the end of their journey, so to speak).

2. Jackal?

I am interested in your decision to cast Jackal as the final member, and also approve of your take, considering you only had a sprite to work with.

3. Neil...

Um... no offense but Neil kinda looks like a girl in this drawing.


Other than that great job. It's a hell of a lot better than I or most of the board could do, I'm sure.
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Posttay120n64 Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:30 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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YOU ARE MY HERO Crazy Dance Very Happy Crazy Dance

Seriously. Those are easily the best drawings of IoG I've ever seen. That having been said, here are my suggestions:

Like Jason said, they do look to old to be canonical. But it's ok. I likes it.

Unlike what Jason said, Neil does not look like a girl. He looks like a ninja. Cool Guy

Love the inclusion of the Jackal, but I think Lily's design could use some work. She appears disproportionate. Perhaps it's her hips?
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PostHydra.7 Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:33 am   Post subject: ahhhh yey Reply with quote

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Jason Tandro wrote:
I like this alot. Your art style is a nice blend of east and west. A couple of things came to mind, but none of them were deal-breakers:

1. The characters look too old.

Keep in mind these kids are in their tween years. Your art makes them look like teenagers (and makes the young Erik look like a 13-year old). This is good, though, because it gives an idea of what they will look like when they grow up (at the end of their journey, so to speak).

2. Jackal?

I am interested in your decision to cast Jackal as the final member, and also approve of your take, considering you only had a sprite to work with.

3. Neil...

Um... no offense but Neil kinda looks like a girl in this drawing.


Other than that great job. It's a hell of a lot better than I or most of the board could do, I'm sure.




1. In the North american version, Will is 16 and the others I thought were about the same. I have been told liessssss D:

2. Jackal! Honestly, If I were to make a graphic novel with this one day, I would have given him a bigger role. He had potential...

3. Seth. Seth is worst. I didn't think Neil looked to bad... but all my male characters tend to be girlly so... x___x
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Posttay120n64 Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:40 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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Awwww....

I really liked your design for Seth... Sad
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Postchicken Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:56 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostJason Tandro Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 6:57 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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Yeah, Seth didn't bother me at all. I actually think he was the third best (behind Will and Jackal).
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Postpsychokind Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 12:39 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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wow, your drawings are really awesome! especially in comparison to the originals Very Happy the only thing is, jason said it already, the don't look like kids.

I hope you'll stay on the forum and paint some Terranigma pictures Very Happy
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PostEverPhoenix Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 1:40 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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thats awesome stuff. never played the game through, but still. win
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PostManibrandr System Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 2:28 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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Nice! I agree with what Jason had said though. Keep it up!
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PostJason Tandro Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 5:37 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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Hmm... I just noticed something. Lance kinda looks like a young version of Dr. Bowman from Star Ocean: The Second Story...



Well I mean the hair colour is different...but still if you compare the sprites...


I can't find a Bowman sprite... oh well.
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PostFreedan Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 9:35 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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It's already been said, so I don't need to say that they seem a bit too old. But I just said it now, which renders that last sentence moot.

...... Confused

Anyway, Lily seems a bit wide in the hips to me. That's about all I can say. Some really good art. Cool Guy
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PostJason Tandro Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 6:14 pm   Post subject: Reply with quote

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Maybe she's preggers. Very Happy

I'm sorry Hydra! I kid cause I love. Very Happy
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PostHydra.7 Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 10:56 pm   Post subject: wahhhhh Reply with quote

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Jason Tandro wrote:
Maybe she's preggers. Very Happy

I'm sorry Hydra! I kid cause I love. Very Happy



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I always mess up anatomy.... I haven't taken any formal art classes.... I will soon though~~~ *determination* I will redraw them.... again.... with freedam and shadow! *^*
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PostJason Tandro Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 12:42 am   Post subject: Reply with quote

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No no! Awww... now I feel bad. Sad I make fun of everybody, especially myself. Your drawings are great.
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