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gamechampionx
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gamechampionx Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:55 pm Post subject: Poem |
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Hey,
I've been around for long enough that you guys need some punishment outta me, so I've decided to unleash something from my poetry collection.
This one is called "Betraying Clouds and Shifting Flesh".
Layers of shifting clouds in the sky
You won't tell me more
But I know why
Etheral fixutres betraying the flesh
Cut the mesh |
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chicken Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 4:32 pm Post subject: |
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kinda short, dont you think? but at least the short part is quite good =) _________________
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gamechampionx
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gamechampionx Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, it is short but I sort of like that about it. It's meant to boggle the reader in as little time as possible. |
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