Terranigma Overworld Remix

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Jason Tandro
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Terranigma Overworld Remix

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This is a re-orchestration of the overworld theme from Terranigma and will be used in TE: Absolute as the overworld theme when you select the SoulBlazer Trilogy soundtrack option.

This re-orchestration was done by yours truly. To be fair, all I really did was tweak a midi file, convert it to MP3, change the orchestration and add some background stuff (such as the percussion and bells).

It's my first remix ever, so I hope you like it:

http://www.sendspace.com/pro/dl/sbuarv
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very good.

the only thing i can say is maybe change the sounds used for the bit that starts about 3/8 of the way through, i'm sorry but to me the sounds used didn't quite fit, other than that it's perfect.
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it still sounds a bit synthesized, needs more base and a little bit more realistic instruments. but I don't think I could do it better^^
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even though i'm not sure what that means i'm gonna agree with it
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it is a good effort - and a good song, but when some of the instruments come in i think the volume is a bit mismatched. ill be a bit more specific

the keys around 0:31 are too quiet
the backing part (i think its meant to be a backing) at 0:39 is too loud, it sounds like it should be rhythm but it overwhelms everything else


but hey, it blends really well - start transitions nicely with the end of it so it wont seem like its starting again from the start
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EverPhoenix wrote: the backing part (i think its meant to be a backing) at 0:39 is too loud, it sounds like it should be rhythm but it overwhelms everything else
THAT'S IT! that is what i meant
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yeah it's my first attempt and FL Studio is not very easy to work with :-D . But thanks for the criticism. It always helps to hear how I can improve my form. Hopefully the next one'll be even better.
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It's a bit short, but I liked it for what it is. :D
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