Illusion of Gaia - Part II

Nurdof · Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:50 pm

Ok, I thought of a good idea.

That idea is where the world is in danger, and the comet wants revenge. Will must defeat the comet with the help of his friends, which in order to do that, he will have to gain new strength and become more powerful than ever before.

EverPhoenix · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:38 am Post subject:

is that in freedom?

whats will doing there?

anyway it is a good idea.

what i would do with the speech bubbles, however: elaborate a bit more. 'for some reason... ' is a pretty direct response to an unrelated question. i understand the meaning of getting to the point, but that is moreso impaling oneself on said point. (approaching too fast)

i look forward to more

Nurdof · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:11 am Post subject:

EverPhoenix wrote:what i would do with the speech bubbles, however: elaborate a bit more. 'for some reason... ' is a pretty direct response to an unrelated question. i understand the meaning of getting to the point, but that is moreso impaling oneself on said point. (approaching too fast)

I would actually have to agree with you on this. Getting to the point too quickly might make a person feel as though they were in a way ignored, and should have whatever question it is they ask well answered by the person who is talking to them.

Thank you for that comment, I look forward to improving on this.

tay120n64 · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:13 am Post subject:

True, but if you think about it, it fits the rushed nature of early games and their bad translations.

Or maybe I'm just making excuses...

Anyway, looks cool, can't wait for more.

psychokind · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:58 am Post subject:

tay120n64 wrote:True, but if you think about it, it fits the rushed nature of early games and their bad translations.

haha I hear ya

you should have played the german translations... they failed so hard

Nurdof · Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 2:47 pm Post subject:

Here's the second comic.

After a long time, Will and Kara finally meet each other in the town of Freedom. They are very surprised to see each other.

And for this comic, Will tells Kara about what he must do and asks Kara if she wants to come with him on a long journey.

Nurdof · Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 11:18 pm Post subject:

Here's the next comic.

Will and Kara finally arrive in Suncoast, where they talk to Lilly. Unfortunately, Will, Kara, and Lilly will be the only ones going on this journey...for now anyways.

Read on to find out more.

Blade · Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 12:28 pm Post subject:

ja...

Nurdof · Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 5:58 pm Post subject:

Blade wrote:ja...

Gee, I wonder what that's supposed to mean...

chicken · Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 4:43 am Post subject:

Zuruh wrote:
Blade wrote:ja...
Gee, I wonder what that's supposed to mean...

its german and means "yes"

Lenc · Tue Feb 03, 2009 8:56 am

Zuruh wrote: the comet wants revenge.

Thats epic right their

EverPhoenix · Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 9:33 am Post subject:

you arent going to be able to portray much action and epicness with the format you have now. so maybe add some narration to the top of the slide? that way you could describe whats happening without using the characters as the only way to communicate

Azure Phoenix · Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 10:36 am Post subject:

why do you keep using the full picture, zoom in on what's happening, sure we have a town, and then we have what we're looking to see, and that's like 1/8 of the full pic, zoom in man, zoom in

Nurdof · Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 10:59 am Post subject:

chicken wrote:
Zuruh wrote:
Blade wrote:ja...
Gee, I wonder what that's supposed to mean...
its german and means "yes"

Ok, because the reason I'm mentioning this is because he's acting like he doesn't really care considering the fact of the three periods he put in his post.

EverPhoenix wrote:you arent going to be able to portray much action and epicness with the format you have now. so maybe add some narration to the top of the slide? that way you could describe whats happening without using the characters as the only way to communicate

Although this is a good idea, I would have to say no to this. Because putting in a narration at the top of the slide would not only take up a lot of room, I might also feel the need to put some characters at that location. It's best to put the narration in your post before actually posting in the comic.

Arashi wrote:why do you keep using the full picture, zoom in on what's happening, sure we have a town, and then we have what we're looking to see, and that's like 1/8 of the full pic, zoom in man, zoom in

I like your idea, but because the picture is too large, maybe I could crop out a piece or two of it, make a new picture, and then post it on the Forums.

Azure Phoenix · Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 11:07 am Post subject:

Zuruh wrote:
Arashi wrote:why do you keep using the full picture, zoom in on what's happening, sure we have a town, and then we have what we're looking to see, and that's like 1/8 of the full pic, zoom in man, zoom in
I like your idea, but because the picture is too large, maybe I could crop out a piece or two of it, make a new picture, and then post it on the Forums.

that's what i mean, crop the important peice out and blow it up (not the explosive meaning) and scrap the rest until it's needed

Illusion of Gaia - Part II

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