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Hey,

I've been around for long enough that you guys need some punishment outta me, so I've decided to unleash something from my poetry collection.

This one is called "Betraying Clouds and Shifting Flesh".

Layers of shifting clouds in the sky
You won't tell me more
But I know why

Etheral fixutres betraying the flesh
Cut the mesh
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kinda short, dont you think? but at least the short part is quite good =)
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Yeah, it is short but I sort of like that about it. It's meant to boggle the reader in as little time as possible.
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