Cheesy story!

[arkisdabomb]

OK, i've writen a few fanfics, and there here. Give me good feedback on them please?

My fanfics

[Muerte]

i only read the terranigma one ... but not bad ... you also reminded me that i have to read something else so thanks for that

[arkisdabomb]

I wrote that last night because I was bored....... took me 5 minutes.

[inferiare]

That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.

I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.

Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.

[Axe Kazama]

slap in a sex scene in there, and you've got yourself a novel
I like Naruto

[arkisdabomb]

That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.

I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.

Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.

If a Narutard is someone who has no idea about the manga or anime, just think they look cool, then no I'm not. I've read all the mange up to date.

And I started a NAruto fanfic a little while ago, I'll finish it eventually.........(not likely)

[inferiare]

That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.

I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.

Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.

If a Narutard is someone who has no idea about the manga or anime, just think they look cool, then no I'm not. I've read all the mange up to date.

And I started a NAruto fanfic a little while ago, I'll finish it eventually.........(not likely)

No, a Narutard is someone who likes Naruto a little too much.. think of it as an insane Naruto otaku.

[arkisdabomb]

OH, I'm not that, just an avid Hinata Fanboy.

[Manibrandr System]

Hinatard XD