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arkisdabomb
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arkisdabomb Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:25 pm Post subject: Cheesy story! |
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OK, i've writen a few fanfics, and there here. Give me good feedback on them please?
My fanfics |
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Muerte
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Muerte Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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i only read the terranigma one ... but not bad ... you also reminded me that i have to read something else so thanks for that  _________________ It's high time I revised this signature. |
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arkisdabomb
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arkisdabomb Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2005 4:31 pm Post subject: |
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I wrote that last night because I was bored....... took me 5 minutes. |
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inferiare
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inferiare Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2005 7:01 pm Post subject: |
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That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.
I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.
Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.  _________________
Presia firle anw faura,
van futare parge iem...
Melenas. |
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Axe Kazama
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Axe Kazama Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2005 5:17 am Post subject: |
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slap in a sex scene in there, and you've got yourself a novel
I like Naruto  _________________ You're just a human being, my dear, sweet child |
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arkisdabomb
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arkisdabomb Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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rainichan wrote: | That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.
I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.
Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.  |
If a Narutard is someone who has no idea about the manga or anime, just think they look cool, then no I'm not. I've read all the mange up to date.
And I started a NAruto fanfic a little while ago, I'll finish it eventually.........(not likely) |
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inferiare
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inferiare Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:15 pm Post subject: |
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arkisdabomb wrote: | rainichan wrote: | That was kind of depressing, actually. That's kinda how I saw the ending after she opened the door, only she saw the bird there. ^^ I liked it.
I didn't read the Shaman King one, only cause I haven't seen it.
Oh, and I like the Naruto sig you got. You aren't a Narutard, I hope.  |
If a Narutard is someone who has no idea about the manga or anime, just think they look cool, then no I'm not. I've read all the mange up to date.
And I started a NAruto fanfic a little while ago, I'll finish it eventually.........(not likely) |
No, a Narutard is someone who likes Naruto a little too much.. think of it as an insane Naruto otaku.  _________________
Presia firle anw faura,
van futare parge iem...
Melenas. |
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arkisdabomb
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arkisdabomb Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2005 11:19 pm Post subject: |
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OH, I'm not that, just an avid Hinata Fanboy. |
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Manibrandr System Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2005 7:00 am Post subject: |
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Hinatard XD _________________
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